Journal Entry #2 Starting With The Basics
Article#1
This article is about Jose Bautista, in the article it tells us what happens during his last possible home game in Toronto as a Blue Jay, and all of his accomplishments over the years on the team. On September, 24th, 2017 the game took place at the Rogers Center in Toronto. Bautista might have his last game because he is older than most players and wants too much money, and his is way to out if his prime to be asking for so much money, and people don't expect the team to be able to reach a mutual agreement.In the lead of the article, it mentions the stats in the game and that would capture the reader's attention to read on, I think that it was a good lead because it made Jays fans very emotional saying that this might be his last game in a Blue Jays uniform in Toronto. During an interview after the game, Jose said,"It's good to be recognized and it's good to feel the love. I appreciate everything that happened today."Yes, the important information was told at the first, the writer said why this game was important and also told us what happened during the game and said what Bautista accomplished over the years. The ending was not very good because they did not end talking about Bautista, they just talked about other things that happened during the game and it wasn't very interesting.Here is the link.
Article#2
This article is about Dwyane Wade, signing a one-year 2.3$ contract with the Clevland Cavaliers, in Ohio on Wednesday, September 27th, 2017. This is important because Wade is reuniting with the Cavs. star player LeBron James, when they played together before for the Miami Heat they won two back-to-back NBA championships. This lead is effective because it pulls in the reader's attention by using quotes people on the management said about Wade playing for them. Basketball fans would be interested in this article a lot and the lead really helps draw people in."We're extremely happy that Dwyane chose to join us in Cleveland and become a core part of helping us achieve success at the highest level," Cavaliers General Manager Koby Altman said. All of the important information is at the beginning of the article, at the end, it talks about the hard decision it was to leave the Chicago Bulls, the team he played for last season. I think this was a good ending because it tells readers about what is going on and how it happened. Here is the link.
This article is about Jose Bautista, in the article it tells us what happens during his last possible home game in Toronto as a Blue Jay, and all of his accomplishments over the years on the team. On September, 24th, 2017 the game took place at the Rogers Center in Toronto. Bautista might have his last game because he is older than most players and wants too much money, and his is way to out if his prime to be asking for so much money, and people don't expect the team to be able to reach a mutual agreement.In the lead of the article, it mentions the stats in the game and that would capture the reader's attention to read on, I think that it was a good lead because it made Jays fans very emotional saying that this might be his last game in a Blue Jays uniform in Toronto. During an interview after the game, Jose said,"It's good to be recognized and it's good to feel the love. I appreciate everything that happened today."Yes, the important information was told at the first, the writer said why this game was important and also told us what happened during the game and said what Bautista accomplished over the years. The ending was not very good because they did not end talking about Bautista, they just talked about other things that happened during the game and it wasn't very interesting.Here is the link.
Article#2
This article is about Dwyane Wade, signing a one-year 2.3$ contract with the Clevland Cavaliers, in Ohio on Wednesday, September 27th, 2017. This is important because Wade is reuniting with the Cavs. star player LeBron James, when they played together before for the Miami Heat they won two back-to-back NBA championships. This lead is effective because it pulls in the reader's attention by using quotes people on the management said about Wade playing for them. Basketball fans would be interested in this article a lot and the lead really helps draw people in."We're extremely happy that Dwyane chose to join us in Cleveland and become a core part of helping us achieve success at the highest level," Cavaliers General Manager Koby Altman said. All of the important information is at the beginning of the article, at the end, it talks about the hard decision it was to leave the Chicago Bulls, the team he played for last season. I think this was a good ending because it tells readers about what is going on and how it happened. Here is the link.
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